This wasn't at all funny to me and the animation just made it all the more worse.
This wasn't at all funny to me and the animation just made it all the more worse.
Now that's what i call amazing animation. :P
The one thing this great animation lacks is longevity.
This is gonna get popular, i think you wrote it excellently.
The talent in music you have is very grand, especially the fact that you make them funny and the way you want them, rather than attempting to fit someone elses wants. :)
Thanks kind Sir.
:)
It's pretty good in length, i don't know a lot of people who can do long length like that.
but the animation needs work, with a drawing pad, you could totally go nuts.
And PM me and i can help you with your audio, to make it sound as clean as possible. (:
LOL i love the ending. (:
Pretty good but the writing is bad, overall it wasn't terrible, but it needed work.
Your art style is what gets me off, just you need more practice.
but still very funny, i understand your timing was off though, for a good joke.
you always need timing, the beats were missed, comedy is like music.
alot of things are like music, you can't miss the beats, or noone is relaxed. (:
hopefully this helps you mister Gorman. ~TimFelt
Thanks for the feedback sir, I agree it was off and I do need more practice, - Chris
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